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Just Stay Awhile by ~nakiro:iconnakiro:

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Cold and dry
Your words they are
Just like the winter days

Empty, hollow
As they form
But I like them that way

Tell me all
I want to hear
It's a game I like to play

I just want
To keep you here
I want for you to stay

So keep it up
Continue on
Keep saying what you say

Whatever it is
That will keep you here
I don't want you to go away
©2005-2010 ~nakiro
:iconnakiro:

Author's Comments

I guess you could say I wrote this for someone and no one at the same time.

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:iconneomi:
~neomi Dec 17, 2005, 4:49:25 PM
Another peice of your creativety. I'm starting to like your works more and more. :)

--
"If you learn something, anything, it will most likely come in handy later, even if it sounds half stupid"
~neomi's personal quote
:iconnakiro:
~nakiro Dec 17, 2005, 6:07:59 PM
Thank you, this was one of my favourites.
:iconracqiadvorak:
~RacqiaDvorak Jan 3, 2006, 7:40:48 AM
Excellent. I like this new form. If you have any others please submit them. I have like a poetry low right now. =)

--
Hold tight in your grasp all the knowledge you can reach
For in your time will it illuminate your path
No matter how dark the night and bleak the times
On the morrow will it shine once more
On those who seek its radiating light

~The Dvorak
:iconnakiro:
~nakiro Jan 3, 2006, 5:37:25 PM
Thanks. I know how that is, I think I'm in one now.
:iconracqiadvorak:
~RacqiaDvorak Jan 4, 2006, 7:51:43 AM
Do you have any poems right now you haven't submited?

--
Hold tight in your grasp all the knowledge you can reach
For in your time will it illuminate your path
No matter how dark the night and bleak the times
On the morrow will it shine once more
On those who seek its radiating light

~The Dvorak
:iconnakiro:
~nakiro Jan 4, 2006, 6:46:09 PM
Probably somewhere, but I don't care much to locate them right now. Do you, I've missed seeing all you guys on here over the break.
:iconracqiadvorak:
~RacqiaDvorak Jan 5, 2006, 5:15:24 AM
I have two currently and no time to submit them(typing speed). I really would like to see anything you've written.

--
Hold tight in your grasp all the knowledge you can reach
For in your time will it illuminate your path
No matter how dark the night and bleak the times
On the morrow will it shine once more
On those who seek its radiating light

~The Dvorak
:iconnakiro:
~nakiro Jan 6, 2006, 5:15:27 AM
One day, when I can think right, perhaps you will.
:iconracqiadvorak:
~RacqiaDvorak Jan 9, 2006, 7:10:13 AM
You stressed out or something?

--
Hold tight in your grasp all the knowledge you can reach
For in your time will it illuminate your path
No matter how dark the night and bleak the times
On the morrow will it shine once more
On those who seek its radiating light

~The Dvorak
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